It’s funny how much the script changes as the comic progresses from script to art to lettering. Space writes the script, then I revise it into what I think will work best in a comic layout. Then I give him the artwork and Script back to input the lettering (text bubbles). quite often, he’ll take my revised script, and revise it -again- based on how I’ve drawn the characters, coming up with something funnier or a more interesting way for them to converse. sometimes it’s the tiniest one-liners that add the best impact to the entire page.